Ronnie, there are some nice changes in this revision! I really like the drum pattern, it fits well with your melody. I like how your bass part changes rhythm, especially how it matches the melody in measure 24! Also, I like the walking bass line you have at certain times. Your chords seem to fit well with your melody. You did not include a description of your changes. 16/20
For your next revision, try to make all of your bass notes fit better with the chords. You have bass notes that clash with some of the chords, such as in measures 23-26, and 28.
Ronnie, there are some nice changes in this revision! I really like the drum pattern, it fits well with your melody. I like how your bass part changes rhythm, especially how it matches the melody in measure 24! Also, I like the walking bass line you have at certain times. Your chords seem to fit well with your melody. You did not include a description of your changes. 16/20
ReplyDeleteFor your next revision, try to make all of your bass notes fit better with the chords. You have bass notes that clash with some of the chords, such as in measures 23-26, and 28.